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By: Screenwriting structure Part 3 : The Unknown Screenwriter

Screenwriting structure Part 3 : The Unknown Screenwriter — Sat, 03 May 2008 23:17:20 +0000

[...] Screenwriting Structure Part 1 and Part 2 discussed those elements (shall we call them DRAMATIC ELEMENTS?) that most if not all [...]

By: Screenwriting structure Part 3 » The Unknown Screenwriter

Screenwriting structure Part 3 » The Unknown Screenwriter — Thu, 30 Aug 2007 23:21:27 +0000

[...] Screenwriting Structure Part 1 and Part 2 discussed those elements (shall we call them DRAMATIC ELEMENTS?) that most if not all [...]

By: Larry

Larry — Fri, 17 Aug 2007 23:21:38 +0000

The flabby second act!

By: Villi

Villi — Wed, 11 Jul 2007 07:22:56 +0000

Been lurking and sneakily reading your xlnt blog. Happy Birthday! I think this Gateway business was the inciting incident. In approximately 80 minutes you will see the light and get a MacBook

By: jodi

jodi — Fri, 06 Jul 2007 08:35:57 +0000

Hell, I’m between I love me some structure talk and happy fucking birthday. So screw that, I’ll just say–many happy returns, lol.

By: Poke

Poke — Thu, 05 Jul 2007 02:37:43 +0000

I think they used Spatula’s structure on “Gigli.”

Poke

By: Thomas R

Thomas R — Tue, 03 Jul 2007 19:57:14 +0000

What I learned tonight writing my own great magnificent script, was that you have you have your own feeling of structure. You know this must happen within 15 pages. This must happen before 3rd act. You know the incident has to happen right before the moment you lose hope.

By: Spatula

Spatula — Tue, 03 Jul 2007 19:56:30 +0000

Welcome back, Unk!!! And happy birthday.

I made you a present- I invented a NEW screenplay structure that is so perfect in it’s design, even I am awed by it. I’ll send you more details later, but here’s a picture to give you an idea where I’m coming from:

http://www.flickr.com/photos/superguncinema/708076725/

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

By: Christian Howell

Christian Howell — Mon, 02 Jul 2007 22:36:22 +0000

Happy BDay UNK.

Mine would be a midway plot point.

By: Pamela Schott

Pamela Schott — Mon, 02 Jul 2007 21:12:57 +0000

Okay, can I just say right now that the odiogo thing is… well, before I say that, let me just confirm: That’s not your voice, is it, Unk? If so, then wow, you sound as intelligent as you write. If not, THANK GOD. It’s so creepy. But so worth the laugh, especially when he says “shitz.” O. my. goodness.

Happy Birthday, dear Unk.