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		<title>Common Screenwriting Mistakes Part 4&#8230;</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 11 Jul 2006 00:22:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[In No Discernible Order&#8230; The last of everything I can think of&#8230;
Derivative story&#8230;
No I do not want to read (or watch) DIE HARD ON A CRUISE SHIP, DIE HARD AT NASCAR, DIE HARD AT COLLEGE, DIE HARD ON A FISHING BOAT, DIE HARD SET IN THE 30s, DIE HARD IN THE OLD WEST, DIE HARD [...]]]></description>
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		<title>Common Screenwriting Mistakes&#8230; Part 3</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 09 Jul 2006 03:40:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Format&#8230;
Remember, we&#8217;re talking spec script here&#8230; Not a shooting script. No need to include things in your scene heading like, CONTINUOUS, DUSK, MOMENTS LATER, DAWN, etc. Just use DAY or NIGHT and, while it&#8217;s acceptable to insert DAY or NIGHT after every slug line, nowdays, you only need insert it in a new slug line [...]]]></description>
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		<title>Common Screenwriting Mistakes&#8230; Part 2</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 07 Jul 2006 22:57:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Action Lines&#8230;
Avoid internal thought whenever possible. We can&#8217;t see this happening. We do not want to create a &#8216;dejected look&#8217; in our minds for your character. Reveal this change of emotion through an actual action and dialogue.
The general rule is&#8230; If you can&#8217;t actually shoot it, LEAVE IT OUT. If you feel that there&#8217;s something [...]]]></description>
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		<title>Common Screenwriting Mistakes&#8230; Part 1</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 06 Jul 2006 14:37:00 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Unk</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I&#8217;ve been reading two or three screenplays a week for the last few months&#8230; From indie filmmakers, all the way to a few Pro screenwriters and it&#8217;s amazing to me how some of these common mistakes really slow down the reading enjoyment.
It&#8217;s true&#8230; You have to know how to write a good story and then [...]]]></description>
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